In the first class in Academic Reading and Writing I met new student from different countries one of them is Salman . He is from Iraq and he is married and he has got four children .
He likes watching TV , walking and surfing the internet . He speaks Arabic fluently and English quit well but he needs to improve it so he studying now in the British Council then he wants to finish his PHD in medicine in Syria .
Zaid Ghazi Aldweesh
Thursday, May 12, 2011
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Zaid,
ReplyDeleteThat's a good, short biography of Salman. A couple of words that you have used the wrong part of speech - can you change them?
1. expansion
2. medical
Can you improve the sentence, 'He is from Iraq...children' so that it doesn't repeat 'He is / has'
See you in class tomorrow.
Emma
Zaid,
ReplyDeleteI did it again!! Not tomorrow but Wednesday!